CK Lynn

I really kinda liked these. They're refreshingly diffrerent from the mostly idistigushable drawings you usually see in this forum.

The swords in all seem too bulky. They don't really fit in the picture. Something sleeker and more jedi would go with the sci-fi look.

I liked the first picture a lot. The other two didn't seem very unique.

Thanks for the suggestions!

Terrific. I loved the imagrey. A few of the verses seemed kind of stiff, though.

Thanks for the advice!

Very good, but I don't like the mole. Add a background and it would look more complete.

The constant -th -th -th was very annoying and detrcted from the poem. Forcing something to sound like old English doesn't make it good, just phoney and stiffled sounding. Let ...

They're really cool. They look like the photos you would see in a museum, sorta speckly, but that just adds to the old time effect

I Like it. You do seem to repeat yourself in different words over and over. Sometimes that works, but not here.

If you're the last person on Earth, who's knocking?

I didn't really like the fire one, too wild and purple. The first one looks GREAT just the way it is.

hmm...I think you could have added more emotion. I think it would be MUCH better as part of a short story.

The imagrey was excellent! However I couldn't tell where you were going with this. It seems to be part love poetry, part fiction, and part oh-what's-up-above-us. Try short stories. Read ...

It's good. The tone changed back and forth from casual to serious, try to make it constant. Also, a lot was left unexplain. And the guy was named Faith, primarily ...